radio poo pee REDUX

hey hey!

i mentioned in my last entry the idea of revamping/arranging the tune “radio poo pee,” this weeks “song of the week” exclusive creative catastrophe. here is it. i call it….(wait for it)…

RADIO REDUX

i think it’s stronger now. i played more with the sound design, creating a little “get into the car, drive around, arrive, get out” sort of sound design, and i modified the music medly to include more song-time and less radio-being-tuned time. i like it a lot more. i also ditched most of the “guy in the car” talking bit, which i think helps.

SO…this is a first. this qualifies as the first revision i’ve done and posted in the song of the week project. i think. at least, the first dual-posting on this wordpress blog thingy in one week. wow. things are getting crazy over here.

obviously, i hope you like it.

i think it’s stronger. i’m happier with it. i’m also a little slow.

thanks for listening.

i’ve posted only the most recent version at http://www.jonsteinmeier.com, but you can still open the original version through the last post “radio poo pee” on this here wordpress dot com blogger thingy.

techknowledgy.

6 Responses to “radio poo pee REDUX”

  1. shelly Says:

    hi jon! i very much like the get in, drive, get there, get out aspect of the redux. but oh- how i miss the throat-clearing! that and the enthusiastic “YESSS” somewhere around the middle. quite charming.

  2. jon steinmeier Says:

    hey shelly! thanks so much.

    i appreciate that you liked some of the “steiny riding in the car” stuff. maybe i’ll throw some of that back in. i figured that first take was too heavy with that stuff, and found it annoying. maybe i’ll throw a couple of little ones back in. stay tuned!

    thanks for the comment!

  3. jim Says:

    I’m sorry Jon. I have not yet listened to the REDUX yet. But in response to Shelly, and having read how you took them out for the newbie, I’d have to say that the “steiny riding in the car” stuff really gives it the atmosphere it should have.

    Happy Thanks Day.

  4. jon steinmeier Says:

    thanks jim!

    man, glad you guys think that stuff is good for the atmosphere. that was the idea, but i was affraid it was stupid or annoying. i edited radio redux a day or two ago, and added some of that back in. maybe i will edit it further. i’m starting to get into revisions, and these sorts of comments are really helpful.

    thanks team.

    happy day.

  5. Mama Steiny Says:

    OK JONATHAN, YOU DID IT!!! Very realistic and fun. I love all the Jonathan comments, exclamations, clearing of throat etc. I think I’ll play this in the car. It will feel as though my son is riding with me.
    AWESOME!!
    hugs
    mom

  6. jon steinmeier Says:

    ha! thanks ma.

    yeah, the revision in this case came a long way for me. i’m glad i kept at this one a little more. i actually have a bit since then too, making a slightly shorter version of the track.

    thanks,

    hugs

    j

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